Fibonacci poems

April 19, 2006

Gregory K. Pincus, author of the blog GottaBook, has invented what might be the coolest form of poetry since the haiku.1 He calls them "fibs", named because of their syllabic relation to the Fibonacci sequence, a pattern in which the next number in the sequence is the sum of the previous two numbers. The first few numbers in the pattern are 0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21, 34... and so on. For example:

One
Small,
Precise,
Poetic,
Spiraling mixture:
Math plus poetry yields the Fib.

You dig? The standard fib is 6 lines with the syllables of the lines being 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, and 8, respectively, but they can get pretty long. I have written a few, and I would encourage you to do so as well. You can leave them in the comments. The following are a couple of my own fibs:

Books,
Books,
More books.
So many!
What's a boy to do?
Take 'em one at a time, I guess.

Small
Bear:
A cub.
Many cubs:
Well, a baseball club.
The Cardinals2... what's all the hubub?

For
Peace?
No doubt:
Bonhoeffer.
Plot to kill Hitler?
Surprisingly, also D.B.

"I
Do,"
They said.
Thus, were wed.
Soon after to bed.
Anxious, the reception they fled.

I could go on, but I shan't. What fibs can you create? I suspect Peter would enjoy this.

  1. I know this sounds preposterous, but really... how many forms of poetry have been invented since the haiku? No seriously... I have no idea. []
  2. Two syllables, i.e. "card-nulls". []

{ 15 comments… read them below or add one }

Tom April 19, 2006 at 3:11 am

Basketball

Beat Jake

Champion

Of the Universe

But he made the shots In fourteen.

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JMS April 19, 2006 at 6:35 am

Cool site, Jacob. I’ve never heard of fibs before. I’m sure DB would be honored to be the subject of one of your fibs. Perhaps you’ll write another fib about DB’s views regarding lies (fibs) and telling the truth!

Best,

JMS

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Tom April 19, 2006 at 9:12 am

Hahaha. I already screwed it up.

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Luke April 19, 2006 at 9:17 am

I
Don’t
Really
Like to write
Poems of any sort
So here’s my fib… I think it sucks!

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Brittany April 19, 2006 at 10:24 am

School…
Class…
my ass.
this s dumb.
is it al worth it?
i’d rather stay in bed instead.

this was written in sociology. which i hate.
so i’m sorry it’s a bit negative towards the academic institution.

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Jake April 19, 2006 at 10:27 am

These are great! Well, except Tom’s. He’s an English major, too.

Brittany, I wrote one in Greek that is almost as negative:

Dead Languages by Jake Bouma

Greek
and
Latin
are both dead.
Only geeks know them.
Sadly, I am fluent in both.

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Molly April 19, 2006 at 11:47 am

Jake,
this
might be
my fav’rite
post on your website.
pretty excited for summer.

and by pretty, i mean, extremely. but, that was just too many syllables :)

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Mom April 19, 2006 at 3:30 pm

Jake,
Jake.
My word!
What is the deal?
Be sure to do your homework!

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Jake April 19, 2006 at 4:17 pm

Mom,
Mom.
My word!
Truthfully,
I thought you were smart.
It goes 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8.

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Gregory K. April 19, 2006 at 5:21 pm

Good Fibbing! I always ignored my dad and never learned Latin, so you’re two dead languages up on me (though I knew BASIC at one point. Does that count?).

Thanks for the link and the Fibs on my blog and here. Fib on!

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Tom April 19, 2006 at 6:57 pm

I’m going to try again….This is in response to Brittney’s about Sociology, which she hates. Mine is about Sociology, which I love.

Race
Class
Gender
My Topics
Here we find problems
And blame them on the rich people.

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Shawn April 19, 2006 at 7:42 pm

Need
food?
How ’bout
a taco?
Sabor Latino!
This is going to hit the spot!

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Jackson April 20, 2006 at 3:39 am

He
ate
alone
everyday
next to the trash bins
and talked to his lunchbox sandwich.

They
laughed
Aloud
callously,
whispered mockeries
slowly, silently stripped his soul

Hope
held
his hand
faithfully
when he could not reach.
He saw the world in shades of grey.

All
stared
at him
vacantly,
his eyes hid behind
the sanctuary of his tears.

Face
hot,
aware.
Nervous knees
fingers fidgeting
Resilient to deafening hate

Trudged
home
under
weighted words,
their daily routine
slinking behind in his shadow.

Help
called
faintly
from darkened
bruises laid blindly.
Invisible. Unaudible.

Each
day
showing
his courage
to walk in big shoes
with gentle steps and feet so small.

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Jackson April 20, 2006 at 3:54 am

Late
Night
Homework
Revising
Religion Essay
Brunsdale’s peaceful at 4 A.M.

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Tom February 6, 2007 at 1:34 am

I am so stupid.

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